The Banal Lords
The Banal Lords — Faction Bible (working title)
Lower Regime nobility of the Agfields — or people dressing as it. The urban elite do not seat them. They take the snub out on the owed.
Symbol & Logo
A brutalist keep on a ruled horizon — two square towers and a central mass with false crenellations, stippled woodcut white-on-black. A ministry block doing a castle impression. No windows. No flags. No need for a siege.
The mark is the house as claim: I hold this yield. The urban Dawn-sun sits on the same kind of hard line; this is that line with a pile stacked on it. Provincial. Try-hard. Honest about the arrogance, if not the rank.
Status: logo established.
Names
Banal Lords is the name that stuck — from the old ban, the local monopoly, not from “boring.” They hold the banal rights of the strips: who may summon a harvester, who may open a sluice, who may grind, bake, press. The city says yield-gentry, provincial, rustic nobility when it bothers to say anything. They call themselves lords, holds, the banal. The Corvée just say the keep.
Overview
South of Megacity One the harvest is owned. The Banal Lords are the rural lower nobility who sit on that ownership — titles the hive never quite confirmed, houses the ministries treat as contractors with crests. They want gilt. They are given a ledger. The stacks do not respect them. The fields cannot leave.
They are not the Regime-as-bureaucracy. They are the Regime’s cousin in the crop: useful, embarrassing, kept at a distance. Some were awarded. Some modelled themselves on a nobility they only saw on the feed. The distinction matters less to the owed than the weather of their moods.
The Keeps
Their houses are large, arrogant, brutalist masses doing a castle impression — towers, gate, curtain-wall silhouette — sitting in open Agfields. They do not need the defence. There is no siege. The walls are rank. Concrete pretending it remembers stone.
The crop runs to the plinth. Peasants and machines work around a building whose battlements are theatre. A walking harvester shares the skyline. That is the whole picture: lord and bot in the fog layer; the Corvée in the mud.
The Ban
A Banal Lord does not have to meet you. He has the ban — the right to put a machine on your strip, to withhold water, to call corvée days when he is slighted. The bots make him look obsolete. A combine does the work of a hundred owed days. So the punishments go petty and personal: a levy to prove the people are still his. Fickle by design. Status panic, not inefficiency.
Relation to Other Factions
- The Corvée: The owed. The audience that cannot leave. Treated poorly because the city will not look at the keep.
- The Partisans: Wreckers. Thieves of the yield. A bot’s broken leg is an insult to rank before it is a famine in the stacks.
- The Regime: Needs the bread; does not seat the bakers. A grain organ in the hive, a provincial title in the field.
- Gen Pop: Eats what the strips send and has never heard a Banal Lord’s name.
Aesthetic
Stained concrete. False crenellations. Orange watch-lights in the slits. Mud roads to a gate that is a checkpoint. Fog. A machine walking the wall-line like a parade.
Mood
Arrogance with a thin skin. Plenty, watched from a slit.
Open Threads (to expand)
- Who actually confers a banal title — a ministry, inheritance, a yield-quota, or a lie that hardened?
- How many holds are there, and do they war on each other in the crop?
- Is the ban a real legal instrument, or only what a lord can enforce with a summoner key?
- What happens when the hive finally notices a keep — promotion, replacement, or a quieter ration from someone else’s strips?